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the warrior

the warrior

Drawing Drawing \ Figure | 07/06/05 @555 | weaponlogic | Comments critiques (14) | Views views (894)


the warrior
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Firstly iam extremely nervous about posting this, its my first piece here that iam putting up on gfx .it took around weeks to complete and there are one or two faults that i will address in my next pieces.

Done on photoshop cs,with a wacom
 
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Avatar weaponlogic

 07/06/05 @570

hey guys this is my first gfx artwork so iam a lil nervous but warren suggested i submit and well here i am
 
Avatar darturbrain

 07/06/05 @574

cool painting- love the colors,
my only crit is the position of the legs- looks a bit odd
welcome to gfx hope you have fun here :)
+5/5
 
Avatar Diane

 07/06/05 @575

Wooooow, amazing first submission Your use of colours is really great! I think there is something wrong with her left arm anatomy (the muscle seems too big), but this is a really nice drawing :)
+5/5
Welcome to GFX!
 
Avatar weaponlogic

 07/06/05 @591

thanks guys i think ill definately enjoy things here, and ill watch my anatomy a lil better on my next submission ill try find some reference, or something but i really appreciate the comments
 
Avatar WarrenLouw

 07/06/05 @599

Yo buddy! glad you could make it! yeah, if anyone picks on you they will have to deal with me! lol!

Good piece of work! i think the position of the legs is fine, just on her one foot, it seems as though shes standing on her tip toes. also, what i think would make this piece better is that you shouldve added more detail to her...dress attachment, and you know it too boy! your just being lazy!! haha! kidding! she does come across more feminine, so toneing down on her muscles would be wise(in her arms, thats all)

what does come across quite well are the designs in her outfit.
Later!
 
Avatar SudnDeath

 07/06/05 @627

nice work - her left arm (right side) is smaller at the top then the bottom (slighty miss purportioned) rest of it is great +7 :) welcome to GFX
 
Avatar Animeshun

 07/06/05 @768

Great use of color; complimentaries and contrasts are very well utilized. I really like the painter style that its done in as well. Overall its really great color work.

Always keep in mind that the elbows fall just above the waist. Also, regarding her stance, her right leg seems fine, but her left leg needs to be positioned further out to shoulder width. Otherwise it almost looks like she could fall over. One last tip regarding posture, the line of the shoulders and the line of the waist are never parallel.

Thats all from me. Keep up the good work.
 
Avatar OXXID

 07/06/05 @772

Love her face, beautiful use of colors (thumbup)
 
Safak

 07/07/05 @685

wow great fire wave
 
Avatar reilanchan

 07/07/05 @891

Nice pose.
I like her face. ^_^
 
Avatar JESR

 07/11/05 @206

awesome fire effect i like it too +9/9
 
Avatar weaponlogic

 07/12/05 @411

thanks guys i really appreciate the support and crits its been very helpful
 
Avatar YIIT

 07/12/05 @878

Well Weaponlogic For a first submission its ok.But i usually dont play nice so lets get to it!...Kidding.Two things came to my attention....Turqouse is a very dangerous color.(i am a Turk afterall and i know the color is a hard one) and i see you used turqouse with cool blue very good choice.(The only colors which will neutralize Turqouse is either white or cool blue (light blue you might say)...anyway. Second steping down a stairway is a "hard to depict posture" but you kind of managed it,the only problem for me is that the left leg (according to my field of view) is a little outward.

Keep working.... 6/8
 
Avatar weaponlogic

 07/13/05 @657

cool thanks man iam gonna up my game for my next piece but it ll be a while
 
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Birthdate:
  10/24/1983 (25)
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